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darkjedi29
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« Thread Started on Apr 6, 2007, 11:32pm » | |
ok this is something i just came up with off the top of my head. please tell me what you honestly think.
DESTINY OF THE WOLF
As he traveled through the forests, he passed many creatures. Some more dangerous than others, but nothing he couldn’t handle. He slowly made his way to a small lake. Who am I? He thought to himself as he went for a short swim. He made his way to the shore and took a long drink. Why am I here, and how can I become normal again? He then looked at his reflection in the water, and staring back at him was a huge, black dog. Why does shit like this always have to happen to me? He yelled as he slapped the water with his paw, spreading the water all around distorting the image he was looking at. “The only thing I know, is that my name is Lykaios. This is what I can not forget.” As he said this he began his journey again, for the cure that would end this long adventure.
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« Reply #1 on Apr 7, 2007, 4:59pm » | |
Sounds like the start of something good. ^^
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« Reply #2 on Apr 7, 2007, 7:28pm » | |
I agree with Josh. It's really cool. *smiles*
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"the life of the flesh is in the blood" (Lev. 17:11)
Cover my mouth,
Prevent me from speaking.
keep me from breathing;
Lest I say anything to harm you.
Become one with him.
Become two with him
Go and become three with him.
Now return to one with him.
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« Reply #3 on Apr 7, 2007, 7:29pm » | |
yay people like my writing ^ ^ *continues writing next chapter*
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« Reply #4 on Apr 7, 2007, 7:37pm » | |
YAY!! do write it pwease! I would like to hear it!
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"the life of the flesh is in the blood" (Lev. 17:11)
Cover my mouth,
Prevent me from speaking.
keep me from breathing;
Lest I say anything to harm you.
Become one with him.
Become two with him
Go and become three with him.
Now return to one with him.
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« Reply #5 on Apr 7, 2007, 9:54pm » | |
Indeed... I'm interested. ^^
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« Reply #6 on Apr 7, 2007, 11:03pm » | |
ok first real chapter after the prolog. i know that im not very good, but i hope you enjoy this.
CHAPTER 1
THE ENCOUNTER
Lykaios slowly made his way through the woods deep in thought. Many creatures sensed his anger and stayed away but some tried to make him feel better. However whenever one would come near him, he would scare it away with a loud snarl. Suddenly, in the distance, he heard what sounded like a twig snapping. He quickly darted to a nearby bush and waited to see where the sound was coming from. With his keen eyes, he was able to see two shadow-like figures in the distance. As he looked closer, he was able to see that they were carrying guns on their backs. “Hunters” he thought as he hid himself a bit better. The two figures neared him ever so slowly, looking for their next victim. As they walked nearer to Lykaios’ hidden position, he started to panic, and was able to increase the size of his claws. “Leave here, before I am forced to kill you.” He growled as he slowly showed himself from out of the bushes.
Obviously unable to understand the creature in front of them, they quickly loaded their guns and aimed it straight at the wolf’s head. As the first of the two pulled the trigger of his rifle, the wolf dodged to the right, the bulled grazing his fur, but he was not hit. The other hunter shot at his feet, but the wolf was quick, and jumped over the bullet and landed on the first hunter. He slashed at the man with his claws and easily slashed his throat. The second hunter knew that he was outmatched and made a run for it, escaping through the way he came.
The wolf slowly continued his journey west, hoping that it wouldn’t be like this the entire way.
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« Reply #7 on Apr 8, 2007, 10:58am » | |
YAY! ^^ very interesting! I like the start of this. *waits patiently for next chap**hums* What will happen next? I dunno....ahhhh must see next chap....0_0 ahhhh!!!
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"the life of the flesh is in the blood" (Lev. 17:11)
Cover my mouth,
Prevent me from speaking.
keep me from breathing;
Lest I say anything to harm you.
Become one with him.
Become two with him
Go and become three with him.
Now return to one with him.
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« Reply #8 on Apr 8, 2007, 3:48pm » | |
*nods* *nods* O_O next chapter!
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« Reply #9 on Apr 12, 2007, 3:06pm » | |
YES YES !! next chapter please!!!
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"the life of the flesh is in the blood" (Lev. 17:11)
Cover my mouth,
Prevent me from speaking.
keep me from breathing;
Lest I say anything to harm you.
Become one with him.
Become two with him
Go and become three with him.
Now return to one with him.
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« Reply #10 on Apr 16, 2007, 10:30pm » | |
Is Lykaios a wolf?
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« Reply #11 on Apr 17, 2007, 7:23am » | |
hiii
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« Reply #12 on Apr 17, 2007, 10:34pm » | |
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« Reply #13 on May 3, 2007, 6:34pm » | |
well....kinda.....Lykaios was a human that was turned into a wolf by a curse and he is on a journey to break said curse. next chapter is almost done....ive kinda been busy with school stuff >_< so ya....soon....
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« Reply #14 on May 4, 2007, 1:45pm » | |
ah busy, that's understandable. Can't wait to read the next chapter. ^^
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"the life of the flesh is in the blood" (Lev. 17:11)
Cover my mouth,
Prevent me from speaking.
keep me from breathing;
Lest I say anything to harm you.
Become one with him.
Become two with him
Go and become three with him.
Now return to one with him.
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